A great example of Skinny Fiction is by the famous author, Ernest Hemingway. He wrote:
"For sale: baby shoes, never worn."
Now, tell me that doesn't give a whole story. Yes, a lot is implied, but that's the power of Skinny Fiction. It engages the imagination, and can lead each person down their own little road based on the connections and understandings they form.
The following is my Skinny Fiction story which is inspired by my novel, IN AN INSTANT, which I am currently having beta read and doing some edits. It's no wonder that it was on my mind.
Diagnosis
by Melanie James
by Melanie James
Uncertainty. Heart races.
A look. A sigh.
Answers.
We cry.
I’m still me.
This story, I wrote a few days before Easter.A look. A sigh.
Answers.
We cry.
I’m still me.
Salvation
by Melanie James
Darkness surrounds me.
I walk toward him; he walks toward me.
Morning blooms.
And this one was inspired by my precious little one-year-old daughter, Allie.
Little One
by Melanie James
Awake; her face is the dawn.
Sticky fingers, tears, hugs, kisses, mysteries solved.
More hugs and kisses.
Away into dreams.
I watch. She doesn't know.
Can you write a story in 25 words or less?
Bet you can't.
Bet I can't? I'd prove you wrong! Thinking, thunking, plunking along . . . 9 days later it came to me - your challenge met in this white box!
ReplyDeleteJami,I love it! 25 words EXACTLY! And you used the challenge as inspiration. Thanks for sharing.
DeleteHe practiced long. His routine down. He walked on stage. The crowd roared with laughter. But why so early? He forgot his pants.
ReplyDeleteHaha, that's great. Thanks for taking my challenge and making me laugh!
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